Thread:Iyyokuk/@comment-6697950-20150809063400

I've read your latest edit and felt the need to comment about some of the issues with it.

Firstly, the standard tense on this wiki is the past tense. Please avoid using the present tense for summaries.

Secondly, please avoid words like "says" and "tells". They are very informal and should be replaced with more specific and formal words.

Finally, please note that avatar names should only be used for referring to the avatars in a game. They should not be used for people in real life when their real names are known.

I hope this helps with your future edits. 