Thread:Gsimenas/@comment-27496644-20171211051513/@comment-6697950-20171216144138

Unfortunately, I have an exam coming up on Friday, so I can't clean up your recent edits. In an effort to help improve your summary writing, (and give you something to do so that you wouldn't need to pile more work on my plate before I'm done with my exam) I marked out some of the issues on the article (you might need to activate source mode to see them). Please work on correcting the issues before continuing the summary.