Thread:Chaos42/@comment-28251580-20161019051102

Thank you four your submissions to the article Progressive Volume 4. Unfortunately I have to point a few things out:

First, please read your own text again before publishing the edit. Some sentences are really weird and make no sense at all. I'm not a native speaker and still have problems understanding what some points are that you want to make, if there even is any in certain sentences. If you read your text, I don't think a name like Ange for Agil would have happened.

Second, we have an edit guideline. This means that summaries must be done not in present, but in past tense. Take a look at the changes Gsimenas made to your first edit and try to use a similar style in the future.

Please keep these points in mind for future edits, thank you.

If you have any questions, feel free to use the Admin support link and Editor's Board forum linked in the previous message from Gsimenas, or join the wiki chat linked in the top bar. 