Thread:Bberb/@comment-6697950-20150124154159

I assume that you were the annonymous user who created the Sword Art Offline Extra Edition, right? If so, although your contribution is appreciated, there were a multitude of problems with the page you made.

First of all, for some reason you omitted the leading paragraph and infobox. And I've also noticed some weird formatting used, like and inconsistencies with the format of the Offline episode pages. Please check the format of similar pages and replicate it when making new pages.

Additionally, the page you made had a lot of style problems. Articles have to be impersonal, so please avoid referring to characters by their nicknames as well as using expressions like "us" or "you". Oh, and formal style is preferred, so contractions and informal expressions should be avoided. Additionally, please note that this wiki has chosen to use the past tense for summaries.

Finally, there were a lot of random spaces and blank lines left on the page. I'm not sure why you left them, but if you don't know why either, please check the source code before publishing a page to check for any unusual stuff like that.

I hope that my comments will help you with any future edits. Thank you for your time. 