Board Thread:Editor Board/@comment-2037710-20140109034628/@comment-24034641-20140109035224

1. you didn't contact before editing (see the adoption part before editing)

2. the description is lengthy as it is, and quite detailed. And all the important details were already in there, you were just adding much more in.

3. the typo part is agreed, however I'll go through afterwards (and you actually left a few typos in your edit).