Thread:Wikiwalker11291/@comment-6697950-20161223104531/@comment-29058994-20161223170621

Sorry about the excessive, off-topic details. It's just that there's very little in the way of non-canon chronology for the other characters on their pages at the moment, and I wanted to incorporate many of the details relevant to the scene which they appeared in without going too far off track. I suppose that wasn't the best idea I had. I'll be sure to focus more on the target character for their summaries.

In addition, sorry about overusing "and." I simply didn't want to cut sentences too unecessarily short, and there aren't many other conjunctions that aren't too specialized for a particular purpose. "And" is pretty generic, so I tend to use it by default if there doesn't appear to be a specific nuance for joining the target sentences together, and it's been a while since I updated my dictionary. I'll try to use other grammatical structures, but I have to warn you, the habit's going to be hard to break.

By the way, how far are on you on your assessment of Kizmel's article? I was kind of hoping to finish her chronology (at least for PV2) before New Year's, though of course I don't want to rush your work. Also, are there any special guidelines for using acronyms, aside from marking them beside the first instance of their full name?