Thread:Gsimenas/@comment-6697950-20130319140815/@comment-6697950-20130407215723

Alright, agreed on the first point, will separate the sentence into two.

That was stated by Kikuoka in Vol 10 Chapter 2 Part 2 and I included it for continuity.

And yeah, I know how that grammar thing is supposed to work, but I haven't done much of any grammar checks yet (would have gone crazy if I did that while writing the thing). For that specific sentence, I think my reasoning for adding commas was to separate 2 adjectives (didn't know if this was correct in English, just used my native language as somewhat of a reference in this case so as not to spend too much time on that part)