Thread:ZeHaffen/@comment-115.164.52.119-20170623070118/@comment-28251580-20170623110540

Hi,

let me clarify some points, albeit this by far addresses not all the issues.

First, the use of informal phrases. This wiki strives to provide information in good quality, thus articles have to be written in proper and formal style. One violation is for example in the first paragraph of your edit:

A huge ass monster appears

Second, misinformation is not allowed. In your second paragraph, you included Scarlet Rain, but she doesn't appear at this time of the event.

Third, and this ties to the first point, the standard for writing summaries on the wiki is past tense. Your entire edit was done in present tense. Look at other articles to get a feeling how summaries should be written.

Fourth, the style itself. Nothing is as boring as an enumeration of events. Character x does y, character z does q. Proper punctuation and transition of sentences is necessary. Unfortunately, most of your sentences lack this, e.g. gather everyone of ALO (main characters anyway) and the members of Nega Nebulas and Scarlet Rain as well as Blood Leopard

This sentence leaves another point to discuss, the use of ALO (main characters anyway) is in no way acceptable, and does in no way qualify to be used on articles.

A spoiler alert is not placed in brackets to a heading, but as template.

I have not addressed all points, but I hope you see why ZeHaffen did what he did. If it were only one point, your edits could be fixed rather easily. But your edit, as is, would require far too much work to bring into proper style that a complete rewrite is making more sense. Not to mention the misinformation, those are in no way acceptable and will be reverted on sight.

I hope this information helps you a bit to better understand the reason your edit was undone. If you have any questions, feel free to ask any of the admins and regular editors.