Thread:Shuzuka serizawa/@comment-22439-20141219081953/@comment-6697950-20141219091054

Glad to have you aboard. Though, I would like to remind you that you must use formal and objective style on articles. Several problems that I saw with your last edit:


 * Contractions cannot be used on articles.
 * The standard tense to use on articles is the past tense. Please do not use present tense verbs unless the context requires it (e.g. the leading paragraph, appearance and personality if the character is still alive).
 * The first letter in a name must be capitalised.
 * Usage of the word "you" should be avoided on article. It's preferable to use "they", "one", "people", "players", "users" and other such expressions instead, as they are more suitable for an article.
 * Try to have one sentence flow into another. How you do it doesn't really matter, but the reader should feel that each sentence is connected to another.

I hope this helps with your future edits. If you have any questions, feel free to let me know.