Thread:Flasa.2811/@comment-28251580-20170310202037

Hi,

I noticed your editing spree on Klein's article. Please use the inbuilt preview function of the classic/source editor to check whether your edit is the one you want to submit. It's a little annoying since we want to review the edit, but can't since you are constantly making changes on it. It would be better to make sure your edit is the one you want to submit, and give us a chance to review. Not to mention that we get notified by each and every edit, and it clutters the Wiki feed so other (maybe harmful) edits can get by unnoticed.

Also, I'm sure you read other parts of the Klein article, thus you should be aware that we use past tense for summaries. About the use of names, real names should be used for real people, avatar names if they are in-game.

Try to not use ambiguous sentences. Eiji fights back, causing Klein to break his arm - Klein's arm was broken, not Eiji's. That isn't really precise.

Something else I've noticed is that there are no transitions between sentences. Klein does X. His guild does Y. Try to combine sentences a bit to use a logical structure that makes the summary easier to read. The first few sentences read like a enumeration of events instead of a formal summary.

I know I'm asking a lot, but since you are new to the wiki I wanted cover everything I noticed :) 