Thread:Iamreverie/@comment-6697950-20141124154246

As promised, here are a few tips that I wanted to share after reviewing your edits:

Style:
 * Please avoid adding information in parentheses. Unless used in specific ways, it gives an impression of informal writing style, which is inappropriate on articles. Instead, try to incorporate the information directly to the sentence somehow. An example of appropriate use of parentheses would be [name 1 or description] ([name 2]), for instance Kirigaya Kazuto (Kirito). This is used when you have to use the character's real name, but want the people who aren't familiar with real names to understand who is being referred to.
 * Try to avoid contractions. They are suitable for conversations and discussions on the wiki, but not on articles.
 * Please use the past tense in summaries. The community agreed to use the past tense as the standard on this wiki. The only times where present is used is personality, appearance and leading paragraph, if the character is still alive.
 * Try to avoid unnecessary words. I know that I'm not the one to talk, but if something is obvious from the context or if something can be said in fewer words, it's best to omit the unneeded words.

Technical:
 * There are two types of links on the wiki: external and internal. An external link is coded by writing [link caption], while an internal link is coded as Page name (if you need to use a caption, Caption . Internal links are preferred over external links because 1) they take up less space 2) the wiki's report pages can track it and thus we can easily find out if it's not working properly. To make an internal link, just copy the part of the URL after /wiki/. Note that the first letter may or may not be capitalised, but all others must follow the capitalisation in the page name. 