Thread:Daniel 1939/@comment-6697950-20140305113127/@comment-6697950-20140306083611

A bit of a grammar nazi: advice or pieces of advice, but never advices.

Oh and about your last edit:

"Not much is as of yet known about her, apart from her status as an Orange player."

I see 9 words here that are completely meaningless. Avoid unnecessary phrases like that. If there is no other information available, then phrase it in a way that would make it obvious without pointing it out bluntly or just avoid saying it at all.

"She is known to be an Orange player and has a dark past."

Such a sentence would mention what we know, while the fact that it is really abstract implies that we don't know much about it.

Edit: When making new pages, you might want to create a draft for the page first. This way, you could gradually work on the page until it's good enough to be published. Also, if you encounter any concerns while writting the draft, you can ask other editors for opinions or help.

If you want to make a draft on this wiki, you could make a subpage for your user page. E.g. User:Daniel 1939/Draft. Or you could do it on an external site. I personally use google docs for my drafts.