Talk:Kirigaya Suguha/@comment-5200686-20121015225534/@comment-5200686-20121016123007

The main problem with Kawahara is that he focuses too much on Kirito to the point Asuna, despite being the main heroine, doesn't get a whole lot of screentime. This is where the main criticism of SAO lies as critics consider Kirito somewhat of a Gary Stu. He needs to start spreading the screen time, developing the current characters instead of making a new one, and stop focusing so much on Kirito. It also annoys people how the girls just seem to exist to just radomly fall for Kirito after getting development for one or two voulmes(exluding Yuuki of course).

Cause the more Asuna and other characters get pushed aside...

The more people are going to stop reading. I'll keep reading, but I know some who have stopped.