Thread:Warmachine375/@comment-6697950-20131207165303/@comment-6697950-20131219164741

Today's edits: http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Aincrad_Liberation_Force?diff=prev&oldid=66680 - no complaints
 * http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Fireball?diff=prev&oldid=66685 - not sure if it was needed, but not really something that I can complain about
 * http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Rage_Spike?diff=prev&oldid=66696 - no complaints
 * http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/G-Takusu?diff=66686&oldid=64475 - here's where I start complaining:

The first paragraph in the edit is... well, I would usually tell you off for going too far into details, but since you used the additions to add more links, the edits are justifiable enough, aside from a grammar error that I have corrected ("shortly" needs to go with something, so you should have added "afterwards"). Nothing serious here.

However, the second paragraph edit is where I would like to complain: "G-Takusu presumably later respawned in a Salamander town along with his defeated group."


 * 1) Did I not tell you anything about making speculations on articles? If not, then I will say it once and for all: speculation on articles is NOT welcomed, unless the speculation is made by the characters themselves or you have good arguments to support such a version (the latter should still be avoided, but even I sometimes do it so it would not be something that I could tell you off for).
 * 2) How do you know that he re-spawned in a Salamander town and not in a neutral town for example? A player can choose to change their re-spawn points you know.
 * 3) Was this change useful to any extent at all? I mean, it is pretty obvious from the context that he did not die in real life (it is not a death game after all), so, it is obvious that he had to re-spawn somewhere, but we do not know for sure where he chose to re-spawn and where he re-spawned is irrelevant to the plot.