Thread:Chaos42/@comment-28251580-20161024142934

Hi,

I saw that you recently tried to add new content. As I have adopted the article to cleanup the current mess, Gsimenas reverted your edit. Adoption means no major edits on the article without consent from the person who adopted the article, as Gsimenas pointed out to you already.

As you're eager to add content and I am the person who adopted the article, please only add content when it adheres the following requirements:


 * Don't change any text currently on the article, I'm halfway done with the cleanup of the current article, which is very tedious and I'd need to start all over again
 * Use the past tense, and try to use proper English. Your sentences somehow read like they are spoken to another person and are very confusing.
 * Explain things that nobody understands without having read the book. I sat an eternity over Blink and Brink and thought it was some idiom until all English editors pointed out they didn't know this construct either. Finally someone who read the Japanese version told me it's the name of the restaurant...
 * Read your own text before you publish! There's a preview button for a reason. Make sure you did use past tense, proper sentence structure and didn't meddle with existing text.

Otherwise we are forced to undo your edits. Thank you for your understanding. 