Thread:GlacialVortex/@comment-22439-20160726231405/@comment-29313007-20160726232417

hiya, so was there anything wrong with my edit?

I didn't attempt to change anything stated, just fixed a few grammatical errors, and made it so that anything that could be missinterpreted, such as the lack of context that could lead to a thing like "him or his" being interpreted as either person, which could potentially lead to users asking for clarification.