Thread:ReshiramArc1255/@comment-6697950-20151125221943

I've reviewed some of your recent edits and noticed some bad style patterns in your writing. I hope that you'd find it beneficial to have such issues pointed out, thus I'll mention a few things that caught my eye:


 * You shouldn't begin a paragraph with a pronoun.
 * Please avoid using contractions.
 * I saw a sentence where you used the word "want" or any of its forms three times in just that sentence. Please use synonyms.
 * Please use the past tense for any kind of summary.
 * Please pay attention to name order. This wiki prefers to use the name order used in the original, which means that you have to reverse the order of Japanese names if you're reading/playing/watching a localised version. 