Thread:KiritoxAsunaNumber1FanLover/@comment-6697950-20150621184503

I reviewed your latest edits and noticed some things that could be improved. Since I hope you'll continue making edits, I figured I'd let you know about them to improve your future edits.


 * Please note that the standard tense for summaries is the past tense. The present tense should not be used unless the situation greatly requires it.
 * If you want to use an abbreviation, the first instance must be in full with the abbreviation in brackets (e.g. Game Master (GM)) and all the other instances can use the abbreviated form.
 * It's preferrable find more specific words than "says" and "tells" for a summary. The two words are quite informal and a paragraph with 5+ of them in a row becomes annoying to read. 