Thread:Gsimenas/@comment-6697950-20130319140815/@comment-6697950-20130407221603

Wow, advanced grammar, I practically tried to avoid anything except for commas in punctuation so as to not make any mistakes (as my understanding of the English grammar isn't that advanced) :D. Edited the draft with your suggestions.

Well, you just awoke and I'm heading to bed now. I'm going to try working on another article tomorrow and will have a busy week this week, so I won't be able to work much on this project for now and you have quite a lot of time to do some reading :)

P.S. If you really plan on checking through my grammar, I'm pretty sure that you can make some edits to the document yourself (at least I think you can edit the document; would male commenting easier). What I really wanted your opinion on is the unnecessary content and a few other concers I had when writing. Grammar and spelling are secondary objectives that come afterwards :D