Thread:Gsimenas/@comment-27496644-20171211051513/@comment-6697950-20171212095424

I removed the comment during my review,  but you can still find it in the article's history log. Or by looking through the changes of my edit.

As for that part about Takeru - one sentence paragraphs are bad by themselves, as they look horrible from an aesthetic and styllistic perspective, but your paragraph was so vague that it basically said nothing. A summary should be concise - as informative as needed in as few words as possible, while that paragraph was both wordy and uninformative.