Thread:Egoistic Ivy/@comment-6697950-20150417132751

Please try to avoid edits like http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Kirigaya_Suguha?diff=110575&oldid=107087

If you want to rephrase something, you have to have a good reason for it. Example good reasons:
 * To correct errors
 * To clarify the meaning
 * To make the sentence sound more appropriate (e.g. sound more formal)
 * To remove redundancies
 * etc.

In your edit, you changed "obtained" to "acquired". This change is very insignificant, as there was nothing wrong with the word "obtained" and you did not make any significant improvements with your edit. 