Thread:SnortingPixy/@comment-6697950-20141222103435

Hi there. I've noticed that one of our senior editors has practically undone all of your recent edits on the wiki. Although I know that Wraiyf has a habit of undoing whole edits despite not all of the edit requiring such treatment and I would argue with some of the things that he undid, I did notice that your edits did have some major problems, so I figured I would explain what was wrong to help with your future edits.


 * http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Phantom_Bullet_Arc?diff=prev&oldid=105114
 * You broke the formatting in this edit. You cannot replace "Hub" with "trivia". Those are two independent sections.
 * This wiki does not allow adding information not related to the series. If there is a crossover or the author specifically referenced another series, then such information can be added. However, fan-based references are regarded as junk trivia. With some effort, you could find similarities between a lot of series, so imagine if every person who noticed these similarities made such trivia. The wikia would be flooded with random and irrelevant information.


 * http://swordartonline.wikia.com/index.php?title=Yui&diff=105113&oldid=105021
 * The changes up to the trivia are simply redundant, as they don't add any new/important information. Japanese character designs are usually quite similar, so unless a similarity is pointed out in the story, you should not accent a similarity. Otherwise, we'd get people who'd make edits on the article insisting that Yui based her appearance on Sachi, just because their appearance is similar and some fans are desperate.
 * You cannot add your personal interpretation to referenced trivias. You're then implying that she has personally claimed so, when in fact she hasn't.
 * The other trivia is either redundant, off topic or just not important enough to include. The trivia about Kirito and Asuna's desires is not really appropriate on Yui's article. I've already mentioned what is wrong with accenting similarities in character design and as for the final trivia, that is speculation which is forbidden on the wiki.


 * http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Konno_Yuuki?diff=prev&oldid=105115
 * Make sure to double check the spelling of character names.
 * As Wraiyf has stated, non-SAO imported avatars are all different from the person's real life appearance, since ALO avatars are randomly generated, while avatars imported from barely different from the person's real life appearance due to the avatar being based on it.
 * Don't change British spelling variants to American ones. Both are allowed on this wiki, so such edits are very redundant and are considered to be attempts at starting edit wars.
 * The chronology edit broke the chronology. A person who has already passed away won't be making an OSS.
 * Not sure why the real life appearance was removed entirely. You might want to message Wraiyf about it.


 * http://swordartonline.wikia.com/wiki/Sinon?diff=prev&oldid=105106
 * If an entire section is marked in red, then that's not a "light edit". Even more so when you have several sections marked in red.
 * You can't change referenced content to non-referenced content. You're changing the author's words to your personal opinion, which is inappropriate on a wiki.
 * Again, double check the spelling of names and terms.
 * Avoid junk information. If you've already said that the avatar is similar to another avatar, don't repeat it again and again. Don't make assumptions based on your personal opinion (how can you be sure that the eye colour is darker? another character's eyes were portrayed as blue in some cases and as green in others solely because of lighting) and remember that the appearance section is meant for describing appearance, not comparing it.
 * If a sentence is already referencing a mechanic that is explained elsewhere, then it doesn't need to be explained again on a different article.
 * Again, don't add personal interpretation to referenced trivia.
 * The trivia you added were unneeded and inaccurate. Phantom Bullet was a reference to a game mechanic, not a sniping ability.

If you have actually read this wall of text, I hope that you'll find at least some of my comments useful for improving your future edits. 