Board Thread:New on Sword Art Online Wiki/@comment-26391060-20131012185415/@comment-1173941-20131012193711

Yeah, the Source Code doesn't really make line breaks for you, unless you make two lines, but that would be treated as.

I went ahead and looked at the source to see where the line-breaks were.

Anyways, your english isn't so terrible that I can't understand it. It's just that there are some gramatical errors, such as missing the subject of some sentences (like "Once start thinking" is missing an "I".)And also that you're nor familiar with the terms that are usually used in certain instances. Such as in "Once start thinking, my soul as a player activated--" you used "start", which is the present tense form of the word, and "activated" which is the past tense. It would be better to use "started", or "began".